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This is pretty decent, and I do think that, while it's not what I generally look for on DA, it's good. A few things, though... 1. The f...

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So, sorry about the silence as of late. It seems that we had to give up our DSL slot so my uncle could have it for his work. He promised to see to it that we would still have internet by repeating the signal over to our house from his since the two share a common yard, but... That really hasn't happened. We SHOULD have internet back in a week or so, though, so I'm not too upset. I'm posting from a campus computer right now while :iconkmorris1984: is in class. I wouldn't even be here today except that I had a job interview and it worked out with me being on campus.

I could be working for a medical lab that processes specimens here soon, which I'm excited about, I just hope I can work out child care since... 7 months old is a little young to be home alone and most daycares/babysitters aren't the sort to just... Be open from 2:30 pm to 10:00 pm in this area. If I can manage this job and get some money saved up, this could be what we need to get ourselves righted finally, which would be a huge relief. In the meantime, I guess I'll be plugging away at applications when I can until something works out.

In other news that's cute, my grandparents' cat has three little boy kittens and she babies them like they were just born yesterday. They do need to find homes before I wind up naming them. The one is very close to being named Charlie... Does anyone like to spoil kittens with teeny little mustaches? If so, please come get him. I can't handle another cat. 
Applejack by Tigerfestivals
This is pretty decent, and I do think that, while it's not what I generally look for on DA, it's good. A few things, though...

1. The feet: The one closest to the viewer looks flat and the way the line bends towards the back closing on the heel makes it look like the ankle is almost dislocated? I don't know if that's what I'm seeing, but that's the best way I can say it. The back foot is better, but it looks a little stumpy like it's a little smashed. Try lengthening it a bit and dropping the top of the foot down a little. There could also be a little more definition where the ankle goes into the heel. Also, toes do vary in length a bit more than just a tall-to-short gradient, but that's me nitpicking.

2. The legs: My only real complaint here is that the leg in the foreground... The foreshortening is good, but I wonder how it would look if the whole leg from the knee to the foot were made a little bigger? Not much, mind you, just a bit.

3. The hand: The fingers are strange. The ones in the back almost look broken the way they turn up. The fingers look a little stubby, too, but they're not bad.

4. The face: This is the weakest point of the picture for me, but for the life of me, I don't know if it would work if you went with a more realistic face or not. Maybe try bringing the cheek in a bit and getting rid of that bulge? Her eyes aren't focused on the viewer, either, which seems to be where they ought to be looking. The nose is a little strange, too, but I would chalk that up to this being based off of MLP to an extent.

5. The tail: Try giving it more of an angle. Essentially, while that IS a bale of hay, think of it as a box and think of how hair generally drapes over a sharp corner. Nothing major here, just give the tail a slightly sharper angle where it drapes over that corner. Think about it a little, does it drape over either side of that corner? Or does it flop to one side of it and leave the rest exposed? Does the corner poke out between the middle of the tail? That sort of thing.

6. The lines: It's not really so much of a bad point, so much as it is a personal taste thing... But the lines kind of take away from this for me. They by no means have to be uniform, but if they were maybe a little thinner overall? It looks like you've just got big, black blotches in parts of this piece and it reminds me of when I was inking with nib pens and they'd suddenly splooge ink all over the place if I varied pressure too much (which wasn't much at all). Used to drive me nuts!

Overall, I really like this, and I think you're doing fantastic, and I really hope that this helps. The strongest part of this for me what how you drew the pelvis. That looks like it took awhile and was a pain in the ass to do, but it was worth it. I don't know if you intend to revise this piece or what, but it's good as is right now. I'd take the info from these critiques and attack the next drawing!
Rainbow Blossom by hellbunny
Rainbow Blossom
So... Yeah, I initially started this as a sketch on the note, then transferred it over to my tower and worked on it a little more. lol her butt looks like a squishy sack of pudding. I was experimenting with pudding butts, I guess. :P 

EDIT: Forgot about some details I still had to add. Fixed it, here's the updated pic! Yeah, I'm still learning this digital art thing, but maybe I'll get it someday when I'm like... a hundred. 
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Hey, just wanted to touch base with everybody and say that I hopefully should have access to my tower soon, which means that I will be able to hopefully have easier access to my tablet and my scanner. This means that I'll be able to work on some stuff. 

Speaking of working on stuff... I have a few sketches that I haven't been able to post (aforementioned lack of access to a scanner and/or tower... ) that I'd love to be able to share, but I intend to clean out my gallery. Am I deleting everything forever? Nope! I will be taking things down, though. Things that I don't feel are finished or things that I feel are dated that I could maybe do more with now. I may even be going through artwork that I haven't posted here that is older than hell to do the same. Why? Why not work on new things? Well... I've been in a bit of a funk art wise as of late. It's been difficult to draw some of my favorite characters and I've kind of struggled. This is likely because I came down with a touch of the Im-fucking-lazies and neglected my drawingtime a bit. Hoping that, by working on my old work and a few requests, I will be able to pull out of this and improve. 

So.... There you go! 
  • Mood: dA Love
So, sorry about the silence as of late. It seems that we had to give up our DSL slot so my uncle could have it for his work. He promised to see to it that we would still have internet by repeating the signal over to our house from his since the two share a common yard, but... That really hasn't happened. We SHOULD have internet back in a week or so, though, so I'm not too upset. I'm posting from a campus computer right now while :iconkmorris1984: is in class. I wouldn't even be here today except that I had a job interview and it worked out with me being on campus.

I could be working for a medical lab that processes specimens here soon, which I'm excited about, I just hope I can work out child care since... 7 months old is a little young to be home alone and most daycares/babysitters aren't the sort to just... Be open from 2:30 pm to 10:00 pm in this area. If I can manage this job and get some money saved up, this could be what we need to get ourselves righted finally, which would be a huge relief. In the meantime, I guess I'll be plugging away at applications when I can until something works out.

In other news that's cute, my grandparents' cat has three little boy kittens and she babies them like they were just born yesterday. They do need to find homes before I wind up naming them. The one is very close to being named Charlie... Does anyone like to spoil kittens with teeny little mustaches? If so, please come get him. I can't handle another cat. 

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I'm just a college student in WV. I love animals, biology and drawing, and hope to be able to do something involving at least one of those once I'm done with school.

Other than that, I am happy to watch crappy movies and drink with friends. Also? That cat? Yeah, that one in the pants? That's my baby.
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Cynical-Pancake Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for the +watch! :love: :la:
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hellbunny Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem. Love your work! 
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SuperSamZero Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love your artwork :)
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hellbunny Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow, thanks! :) Means a lot to me <3
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SuperSamZero Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no prob, aww glad I made u happy :3
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tracyblank Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Professional
:love: thank you so much for the kind words and for adding me to your watch list! :blush: i'm honored and i llama you!!

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